Yesterday my friend finished reading the karate zombie novel, which I find amazing. He got through the whole thing! He suggested I add a couple of chapters to give closure on some of the minor characters, which I don't know, may be necessary. I haven't read it.
And I sent off Dolphin to the TPL writer-in-residence, which should provide interesting feedback. We'll see.
So I think I'll give Dolphin a couple of weeks of rest, and work on Bezoar in the meantime.
And maybe start reading my karate zombie novel.