Tuesday, February 04, 2014

In Process -- Jan 2014



First Draft


“Limering”. Now around 30,000 words. Not sure where it’s going. I mean, I know the story, but the worldbuilding is weak. This has happened before, so I’m not worried. Clearly the second draft is where the magic happens. 

Editing


“Wind/Water/Salt”. Read the whole damn thing with pen in hand. This actually went better than I expected, once I got a plan together. About 11 days from the end of the month I realized I was averaging one chapter per day, and that wasn’t going to cut it, with 47 chapters. So, I made a schedule – realistic, with days I could read a lot, and other days I could read just a little.
Getting through it meant I could throw out the handwritten stuff. I deleted the really repetitive bits I mentioned last month and used up some notes I’d made whilst typing. As usual I found myself trying to move more and more things forward in the story, and revised chapter 1. Then I switched chapter 2 and chapter 1, and now I think I have a start at a good opening, at least. It still needs a lot of work. A good goal for February might be to revise chapters 1-4 completely.
I’ve reached an interesting point with my writing where friends and family have been hearing about it so long with so little progress that they have lost interest. Well, except for the boy. He asks occasionally, usually when we’re in the car. Maybe it’s just to make conversation.
 

Knitting

Hella Fair isle dress in Kauni. The ruffle is blocking now, and I’ve done the armhole edging and I’ve started the neck (which needed redesigning) so all that’s left is blocking the body and then sewing on the ruffle.
“Kaffeklatsch” (self-designed).  Didn’t get far.
“Ribbon Chase” (self-designed). Started a sleeve as a whim, a sweater based on the same principles as the carousel socks. On the 21st I lost this project in the parking lot of the school where my band practices. I even went back looking for it! But I didn’t find it. I checked online to see if the yarn was still available, but I didn’t order it yet, just in case. Mostly I didn’t want to have to start again. And it did turn up! When I got to band on the 28th my ball of yarn with a third of a sleeve was sitting on my chair! Oh joy! Oh bliss! So now I’m renaming this project “St. Anthony’s Ribbon”. He’s the patron saint of lost things.
“Ceremonial Armour”. Ignored.

Monday, February 03, 2014

What I read -- Jan 2014



“A Natural History of Dragons” by Marie Brennan. I basically told the boy to buy me this for Christmas, so he did. He started reading it on the subway on the way home from the store, and then had to find another slipcover to put on it so he could continue reading it in my presence. I was sort of wondering why he was reading “7th Sigma” by Steven Gould again (not that there’s anything wrong with that book), but it  turned out it was the only hardcover he could find in the house that was the same size. So he’s carrying on the family tradition of reading books before giving them away, so when someone gives a book, the recipient can say “thanks, how was it?” He found the author photo at the back intimidating. I loved the narrator’s voice, especially when she dissed her previous book. So charming!

“Vicious” by V.E. Schwab. Got it for Christmas because I asked for it. There were some stressful moments reading this book, but VES did a good job moving things along so the stress dissipated (unfortunately into new stress but whatever). I have a tendency to sometimes read a few pages before bed, and maybe due to the short chapters and the tension, this book threatened to turn into a stay-up-all-night read – I wanted to see what Victor had done, etc. One thing that bugged me was Selena’s motivation – she seemed like the least clearly-drawn character. But I loved Victor’s building of his own morality, reminiscent of Spike in Buffy. A fabulous read.

“We Are All Completely Beside Ourselves” by Karen Joy Fowler. Another author who I got turned onto by her short stories, in particular one bought by Gwenda Bond for a YA special issue for some mag that was about a mom and her daughter’s vampire boyfriend. And something in that fairy tale collection last year… anyway. Really good.

“Going Bovine” by Libba Bray. Sometimes the order you read things in has a huge impact. After the KJF book, the voice here was extremely off-putting. I hadn’t meant to read it now, but the Toronto Public Library had denied me privileges until I produced some ID with an address, and I don’t go in and not take something out, so here we are. After about 40 pages, I was over that. Still, maybe it wasn’t the book for me. I was annoyed by the “it’s all a dream” implications throughout, but I guess it ended okay.