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In progress -- November 2022

Wind/Water/Salt Chapters 39-51: Still need to take up comments and revise. 

Persephone (probably not its real name): Worked more on the ending (which despite what I wrote last month wasn't done, just rewritten what I'd written before). The one POV's ending is kind of done-ish, and I had a revelation about the other POV's, which makes the whole story make sense. 
Short Stories: Went through all the comments on the one I put up last month and pulled out another one from the archive. Then the boy challenged me to read the crits on the one I posted recently, so I did, and we talked about the ending, so maybe I'll work on that. Then I was reading twitter which gave me an idea about how to fix another story, which I started to do instead. The point is, lots of plans, no action. 
Critted 9 Got back 4 
Did I mention I decided to scale back my reviews to two per week to give myself time to actually work on my own projects? I did. Did I work on my own projects? Hahahahaha. 
Submissions 0 Out there 1 Rejects 0

Knitting
  • Striped long-sleeved t-shirt (self).  Would have worked on this, except for the socks. 
  • Tay Tartan cardigan (Martin Storey). Decided I need to use the needle on something else, so this had to be finished. I did maybe 8 rows. 57 to go, then the endless finishing!
  • Extra Whip socks (Coffeehouse knits). Finished the ninth, tenth, and eleventh socks, started the thirteenth (complicated story. I'm pretty sick of socks, but Christmas is almost here. 
Sashiko project: I didn't work on it because I think it's going to be too long and dowdy. Shortening it now is easy. 

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