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In Process -- June 2020

Wind/Water/Salt
Chapter 23 - 28: Need to be taken up. 
Chapter 29 - 30: Finished and posted. 
Chapter 31 - 32: I combined 32 and 33 into one, removing a pointless stop off to make tea. Almost finished, almost posted. 

Made a new Chapter 33 out of part of Chapter 35, originally a Fairfax chapter, but I decided Preston had to do that instead. I deleted all of Chapter 34 but about two paragraphs, and rewrote it to make Chapters 33 and 35 connect together. 
Then I recrafted 35; part of it actually made sense when I started and got to delete about half of 36 because I didn't need it anymore. Also read Chapter 37 which looks like at some point in the distant past I combined two chapters together there too, because the POV switched half-way through. I'm sure it's better now. 

 I'm doing a project management course, and I'm using WWS as the project to manage, so expect this sucker to get finished. 

Persephone (probably not its real name) 
Last month I made a list of outstanding scenes and started checking them off. 

 Short Story
There's an item on my Activity Tracker called "Shorts & Mktg". Things came back. I need to get them out again. 

 Connecting
Critted 8
Got back 5 
Subs
0
Knitting
Soxx #24.5 (2). Finished. 
Soxx #3. Finished. 
Open Road (Knitty Winter 2019). Finished. 
Soxx #12 (2). Finished. 
Soxx #24.5 (3).  Sock #1 foot.
Aberdeen Agryll (Martin Storey). 6" of body (doing it in the round instead of flat as in pattern)

 I also worked on my sashiko sampler and sewed the neck and darts on that tunic.
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