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In Process, June 2019


Wind/Water/Salt
Chapter 17: Fairfax needed to be a harsher individual. Or at least he needed to project as much.This chapter is so close to being finished!
Chapter 18: This was in the wrong place, not lost! It had no point! I started over and wrote it fresh. I think it’s more efficient this way. I read the old one, and there were a couple of ideas I could keep, but…
Chapter 19: Started marking it up, thought I lost it, found it again…
Chapter 20: Did one pass through this one.
Jane Ann McLachlan is doing a series of challenges for June. I tried  to keep up, using them to stay engaged with WWS, but I missed/skipped 2 because I’m a little bit in love with my intro and then fell off the wagon completely. 

Persephone
The plot is still the weakest part. I have an ending, I have a beginning, but I have no real antagonist. Lindsay has more backstory now. Maybe I should have done more of that JAM stuff with this story rather than WWS, but I wanted to keep WWS moving forward, so I don’t regret the choice. I could do it all again later…

Connecting
Critted  6
Got back 1

Subs
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Knitting
FI Corset belt. Started month half done. Didn’t work on it because it’s not portable.
Midsummer Aran (IK Summer 2013). Started the month with 10” of body. Worked on this a lot while watching “Stranger things”. My goal was to be caught up by the time Season 3 started so I could be part of the zeitgeist for a change. Oh, and to finish a sweater at some point. The body is now done to the armholes and I have a whole sleeve and started the second, and two episodes left of Stranger Things season 2. 
Gold Digger (new directions in sock knitting). Started the month with six inches of the first sock. Now I’ve got three inches of the second. 
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