In Process -- October 2013

First Draft
“Limering”. This was going to be my nanowrimo project, but then I started writing it so I guess I’ll do something else (probably actually type up Wind/Water/Salt or revise Clairvology or both)
“Foundling”. Short story, finished.

Editing
“Imp Face”. Fifth draft -- improved the beginning and ending.
“Selkie Girls are Easy”. Fourth draft almost done, way better. I'll call it done after I go through the first four pages again. I still need to get rid of a bunch of words, but it’s much tighter. The problem with writing things in small chunks is I get repetitive, and then when I also edit in small chunks I don’t notice. I think I’m a small chunk first draft writer, and a big chunk editor.

Connecting
Ha.
Circulating
2 out there.
8 rejects for 2013 so far.

Knitting
“Ceremonial Armour”. Ignored it.
Penzance. Done!
Hella Fair isle dress in Kauni. A lot of other things would have gotten done if I hadn’t become obsessed with this project. I’ve got about 20 inches.
Carousel socks. Started the first one. Gift.

Best TW feedback ever

Over at the dayjob, SMEs are feverishly trying to get documents back to me all marked up, in preparation for the release that's supposed to happen the week I'm back from VP. Today's best comment: Unfortunately not true. SMEs, they're so cute.

Moraine

So a couple of days I thought I was done with this short story, and I wrote the last line of the story. I even dated it (that's how I can tell it's over). It was a little long, at 6600 words (I was aiming for 5000). But then I was walking to work, and I thought, "My, that was a lame ending. My endings are all crap." So yesterday morning, I scribbled out the date and wrote a bit more. And this morning I wrote a bit more again, and I dated it and called it done. And still, that ending seemed lame. So a few minutes later, in the last paragraph, I scratched out "the Oak Ridges Moraine" and wrote in "that stupid moraine". Much better. Now I can move on. But in the meantime, I was doing a little research about the Moraine, and I discovered that EGTourGuide lives on it. Only by one or two hundred feet, but I thought it was funny. Good for you, EGTourGuide, with all those excellent plants growing on that substandard soil, where in the olden days (you kno...

What I read: March 2024

LHC #240: "Vita Nostra" by Maryna and Serhiy Dyachenko. Translated by Julia Meitov Hersey. All I knew going in was dark academia. This was a neat thing to read after A Deadly Education last month. The students can leave this school at summer and winter break, but maybe they shouldn't. Also, interesting education method, providing Sasha with a CD player and punishing her if she leaves it in the mode where it plays all the tracks in sequence. "Norse Mythology" by Neil Gaiman. When I finished Ragnarok by AS Byatt (last month? January?) I was thinking it might have made more sense if I had any knowledge of the subject matter. The boy had left this lying around, and it was not a tough read. LHC #241: "Science on a mission: How Military funding shaped what we do and don't know about the ocean" by Naomi Oreskes. I deferred this once because it was so long. History of science is challenging for me to read, because of the need to get a grasp on dispr...

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