In process -- August 2013

First Draft
“Cold Summer”. Short story. It’s terrible.
“Limering”. Why yes, we’ve seen this name before. But that short story was crap, and I have an idea it’s perfect for that I might do for Nanowrimo. It’s in the notes-and-noodles stage.

Editing
“Imp Face”. Some ‘real writer’ online suggested doing a draft in a different mode, things like that, to liven it up. So I set it in the same world as “wind/water/salt”, which is how it got tension, since it was just a sequence of events before. This is probably the most radical change I’ve ever done for a second draft. And then more cleaning for the third draft. Once I've typed up those changes, it might be time to take a break from this story.

Connecting
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Circulating
1 out there.
8 rejects for 2013 so far.

Knitting
“Ceremonial Armour”. KF cardigan. Six rows from finishing the bodice. I haven't been working on it because I'm not sure it's long enough so I'm being passive-aggressive about it.

IK Vertex cardigan spring 2013. Done.
Penzance. Deeply into easy parts.

Eye Lace Tunic IK Summer 2013. Perseids. Started because it was August 11 and, well, perseids. Done the back and front.

Best TW feedback ever

Over at the dayjob, SMEs are feverishly trying to get documents back to me all marked up, in preparation for the release that's supposed to happen the week I'm back from VP. Today's best comment: Unfortunately not true. SMEs, they're so cute.

Moraine

So a couple of days I thought I was done with this short story, and I wrote the last line of the story. I even dated it (that's how I can tell it's over). It was a little long, at 6600 words (I was aiming for 5000). But then I was walking to work, and I thought, "My, that was a lame ending. My endings are all crap." So yesterday morning, I scribbled out the date and wrote a bit more. And this morning I wrote a bit more again, and I dated it and called it done. And still, that ending seemed lame. So a few minutes later, in the last paragraph, I scratched out "the Oak Ridges Moraine" and wrote in "that stupid moraine". Much better. Now I can move on. But in the meantime, I was doing a little research about the Moraine, and I discovered that EGTourGuide lives on it. Only by one or two hundred feet, but I thought it was funny. Good for you, EGTourGuide, with all those excellent plants growing on that substandard soil, where in the olden days (you kno...

What I read: March 2024

LHC #240: "Vita Nostra" by Maryna and Serhiy Dyachenko. Translated by Julia Meitov Hersey. All I knew going in was dark academia. This was a neat thing to read after A Deadly Education last month. The students can leave this school at summer and winter break, but maybe they shouldn't. Also, interesting education method, providing Sasha with a CD player and punishing her if she leaves it in the mode where it plays all the tracks in sequence. "Norse Mythology" by Neil Gaiman. When I finished Ragnarok by AS Byatt (last month? January?) I was thinking it might have made more sense if I had any knowledge of the subject matter. The boy had left this lying around, and it was not a tough read. LHC #241: "Science on a mission: How Military funding shaped what we do and don't know about the ocean" by Naomi Oreskes. I deferred this once because it was so long. History of science is challenging for me to read, because of the need to get a grasp on dispr...

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