Robynettely

  Wind/Water/Salt Chapters 38:  Took up comments.     Chapters 39-51:  Still n eed to take up comments and revise.  Persephone  (probably not its real name): Went back to the start to fill in rather a lot of missing scenes. Not sure what the point to them is, but some of the information is important. This section of the novel needs another layer of something going on rather than just the obvious. I'll keep working until I figure out what that is, I guess.  I also seem to have gotten to the limit of what Google Docs can do as a single file, so I broke it into 4, and it's much more searchable now.  Short Stories:   Found a market for another one, so I posted it as-is to the OWW for commentary.  Critted  8  Got back   6   Submissions  0  Out there  0  Rejects  0 Knitting Striped long-sleeved t-shirt  (self).  Started the month about four inches below the armholes on the body (knit top-down). It's really boring, so I just work on it while watching TV. That netted me about 4 inc